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that story is...really fucked actually, but pretty interesting....i dont get it though...@.@...so, is Kaiba gonna kill Tristan or what? And why is Ryou not...psychotic, i guess? after being repeatedly beaten and killed, why is he still so optimistic? got a will of steel that one does...

Damn...is it just me or Malik's and Yugi's first reactions to what Ryou told them about Seto just down right unbelievable! After all the stuff those two went through so far in this fic(Especially when Seto force them into jacking off and getting blowjob!), Ryou getting raped by Kaiba wouldn't be considered that big of a stretch from their reality, don't you think? They really need to lay off on the sex because I think all that semen destorying thier little brain cells!! Sheesh!

T_T *sniffs* This is getting me sad. They shouldn't turn on each other like that and poor Yugi's caught in the middle! As for Kaiba...

Malik: Ooh! Let me do it! Let me do it!
Yugi: ME TOO!
Ryou: Goes triple for me!

Me: *removes three stun guns from out of nowhere*

Kaiba: @_@ See ya!

Three hikaris: GET YOUR ASS BACK OVER HERE, SETO KAIBA!

Kaiba: HELP!!!

Me: *chuckling* Continue the update. I hope things turn good in the end.

Ryou!! I'll save ya!!*Hitomi tries all she can break through the barrier between reality and the fanfiction univerese but to no avail* CURSES!!

I'm ready to give Kaiba a piece of my mind! How dare he do that to poor Ryou! Ryou should run away and find Tristan and set things straight! Good update!

DD: Poor Ryou
YD: That's okay. Tris'll save him.
DD: Yugi needs a slap in the head.
YD: Agreed.

How the hell can Seto pull off being a big asshole and STILL be sexy? Ryou should go for Seto, that's a pairing you rarely see. I don't see anything wrong with being with a sexy guy who's a big meany; as long as he's dishing out the dollars, all's good! MORE SOON!!!! (Please?*grin*)

T_T poor Ryou! Let him know I love him very much! @_@ KAIBA MUST SUFFER FOR HURTING THOSE LITTLE ANGELS!!! KEEP UPDATING! And make sure Tristan saves Ryou! Don't let those damn yamis come after them again! (Almost made it sound like Damn Yankees and I'm Southern at that! LoL)

Awwww.... Poor Ryou-kun!!! Seto's such an ass! *growls as she thwaps Seto over the head with her GIANT PENCIL OF DOOM*

SETO: OUCH! What the hell was that for?!!!

For being an ass. *glares*

RYOU: Okay... I'm not one to like violence... But even I have to admit you had that coming Seto...

YUUGI AND MALIK: *nod nod*

*snickers* You three want me to hit him again? Or do you want to?

RYOU, YUUGI, AND MALIK: *look at eachother* We want to!

Alright! *draws up three GIANT frying pans*

SETO: O_________O *runs*

R,Y, & M: *evil grins* *pike up the frying pans and chase Seto*

While my muses are busy... I'll give this a proper review... Awesome story! Keith and Seto need to die though! >.< Anyway... Please continue soon!!!!

Just read the 13th chapter... (and the first 12 some other day)

I'll love Ryou anytime he wants me to ^.~
(or I'll beat Bakura until he loves Ryou)

Anyway, keep up the nice work, can't wait to find out what will happen ^.^