rate_review Reviews

This is the first time i ever read a story with this paring, wow is all i got to say

Haha. I can't believe anyone ever took this story seriously. ^_^ Oh! It's good to know I can always look back at this and have a good laugh. It makes my sides hurt just thinking about it, lol. As for reviewer Cecile, give me a break, it's a one-shot. One I didn't really care for, and Pegasus was joking about his little 'token' from their experience. It wasn't meant to be spectacular, I prefer SetoPegasus. And HonJou for that matter. You guys amuse me, even now. Ha, it's good to be Pegasus...

Oh well, it was kept to its title ten minutes. I think you are going to fast. Do not you think after all, let give these two a littler more of seduction do not you think. One two it just know work as well. The writing has to appeal, turn and play with mind the only way is by going very, very slow. You got it! Last part creepy how can Pegasus keep that thing as a remembrance it can not happen.

um.... interesting. this is new... *has funny feeling deep in her chest* I would have never thought of this, i always thought of bandit keith more of Peggy's type.

Oh, and i liked the "Keith pointed his finger at him" *re-enacts what she did when she first read said part* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH*falls to floor, rolling around and holding her chest*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA*runs to tell her mother about it* THAT WAS GREAT!!!

And another thing, it's good to see that youe the thinking of using safe sex. You don't see that much in fics.

GOOD JOB!! WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF PEGGEY OEY OR JOEY/PEGGY!!

*blush* That was good, and had its funny parts, too. (Finger? Odd-tasting fruit juce?) (Also finds it funny that the previous reviewer suggested a sequel. It would be kind of hard to do, concidering what Joey dislikes....)

hmmmmmm....very odd pairing..i love it! i've read Pegasus/Joey fics before, but never this good! and they're a pain in the ass to find. any way, please write more! like, a sequel or something! or just another fic. any way, i loved the fic! bye!

I don't know what to say...except now I can think of a new sexy pairing in my head! That was completly random, but completly worth it! Great PWP! It could be a continuation, but only if you know wPegePegeasus comes back into the picture.
P.S.- Do you think that Bandit Keith was really pointing his finger or did censorship blot out a gun?

ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!! JOU "TAKE" PEAGASUS!!!!!!....O.O..
WHOA!!!!!....now thats hust weird...i think only cause this
is thrst rst time that i ever read a fic as them paired off...
interesting indeed...kinda kowaii also..hahahaha....but
nothingless great fic....very good....

That was too kewl!!! Hmmm, I wonder if there will be a sequal or something???