rate_review Reviews

This story has a very good story-line. Also, each and every chapter keeps me hooked and anticipating what's next. I love it! When the next chapter going to be up?

I really like your story, it's very well written.

Please put more Yami/Yuugi in there..... l love reading about them...and maybe a little more Jou/Seto but please continue!

~ Jessica ~

Hey don't knock yourself, I'd pay someone for a pic of Ryou in a fairy costume too. ^.^ I guess that is pretty sad...*sigh* oh well...GREAT CHAPPY! MORE MORE SOON PLEASE! ARIGATO! Ja ne!

Awww poor Malik. ;_; *cries for him* hmmm I just have to say good chappy and I hope you have more soon, one little note though, the markings on Malik's back are deeply cut scars. Not tattoos. That's not the same thing. Just handing out some friendly facts! MORE PLEASE! Arigato! Ja ne!

Wow good chappy. Very interesting and moving for me anyway...dunno why really. Nyways...this was good and I hope you update very very soon! Pwease? MORE PLEASE! Arigato!sumisumi! ^_____^

Me: wow, a joey/yugi lemon in this chapter
Yami: isn't they r your least favorite couple?
Me: yea, so?
Yami: never mind. *leaves room*
Me: *blink* usually she'll get mad after i say something back, but now, i don't know. *shakes head* anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! *followz Yami*

Please, please, take your time. It's a good story, but you're right, the rush is killing the plot and momentum. Hope the story gets back on track next update.

No! Leave it the way it is. (chapter 14) I like it. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite fics. And you up date often. That makes me happy. ^_^ Hurry with more chapters please!

Me: *blinks* uh, sorry i haven't reviewed for awhile
Yami: *smirk* yea, right
Me: *pouts* its true! oh well, whoa, Duke has a son?
Yami: *snicker* u probably don't think i have children of my own do yea?
Me: *looks at her* do u? *almost crying*
Yami: *frowns* of course not baby *hugs me*
Me: *smiles* ANYWAYZ, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
YAMI: *sighed* yes, please!!! *carries me to the bedroom*
Me: Yami! I CAN WALK!!!
Yami: ah, i know, but i want to carry u though. *closes door*
An Unknown voice: PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!

I don't think Jou could kill anyone even if really wanted to. ^^;; well, maybe. But whatever. This is interesting and good and I hope you update soon. I haven't read a fic like this really before and it's different....some ways good some ways bad. But. I want to read more! ^_^ Ja!