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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YEAH YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!

Sorry love the fic, that pov was done so well to ^-^ you're so good
keep it up ^-^

Joey Peace for IYYashi.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I mean peace sign from Joey for you

bye bye
jenn
person Ryu Tiamat
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic! Out of curiousity, though, how come you don't seem to like Anzu? I have no idea how she acts in the manga or in the Japanese version of the show (all I can do is watch the American version of the show), but from what I've in in the American version, Anzu seems like a nice enough character....anyway, update soon!

person leaf Zelindor
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
eeeeee, that was cute! ^_^ ~Leaf~
person Kitt
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well ::Shrug:: you're fic so I only say :P on the evil Tea thing :P, but it's still really cute XD. Cute. ...Must stop laughing. Cute.

::waves a long-live-nonsensical-reviews flaggie:: ^^;
person Saffron
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Bottom lip trembles* Why...Tea Why...*Sobs*
person KC
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: yay, you've updated!!!
Yami: she did? Damn, i guess sendinr tor to the shadow rhelm is no good now.
Me: how do u know if its a her?
Yami: *shrugs* i just do
Me: *sighed* typical Yami. Anywayz, please continue!!!
Yami: what do u mean i'm typical?
Me: u always guess.
Yami: does it bother u?
Me: not really. but it could get annoying.
Yami: *shrugs* aibou, your review?
Me: i know Yami. *rolls eyes* ANYWAYZ, PLEASE CONTINUE AND TO UPDATE FOR THE WARNING MY YAMI GAVE U!!!
person Kitt
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rawr -.o ::waves pro-Anzu flaggie::. But none the-less, nifty. Kinda slow, but I like the cliffhanger :D. ^^; Heh, has Seto figured out that Jounouch the the puppy yet ^^?
person Seth
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
o.o;;; Ooo-kaay... I was NOT expecting anytihng like this... Heh, well I'm uh, excited? No, afraid - well I can't wait for the next chapter, poor Joey... *sigh* I don't remember my cousin telling me about THIS part of that story. ^_- Anyway, this was a very unexpected plot twist - one that has me anticipating the next...

Later...
person Medatsu
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It has great naration. And the feelings are really shown! I think they should get together and talk before the lemon.