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um a son with joey jejejej ^_^!

such a lovely little story!!! as for ideas...... well the Dark Magicain has helped Kaiba so much, maybe he should ask Dark Magic boy if he has a wish and use his last wish for the magician? Corny idea, but it was a thought. Maybe u'll have the next chappie out sooner.

You know what would be funny? If Joey got pregnant... That would be too funny... Um... That's not really a suggestion it's just me rambling on... Heh, anyway, this was eat eat chapter. And despite that cliffie, everything was near perfection. I'd say perfect, but 'perfect' doesn't exist.

Great chapter and hell, good story. I can't wait to read more.
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Waaaah ;_; a cliffie. evil Evil EVIL! Oh well. Just keep going and I may not go Bakura on ya!

AW! How cute! What a groovy story! Keep on truckin'!

I leave for a while and this is what happens?? I'm referring to Tea raping poor innocent Joey... Such a sad chapter... Sorry about not reviewing; it's been a very agitating week and I haven't been able to get to the computer. -_- I'm off to read your next chapters,

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So sweet... And I forgot to comment before on chapter 3, "thingy" was so funny. I bursted out in a small fit of laughter when I read that...
This was so sweet and heart-warming. Yeah, I actually felt my heart beat once or twice.

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Loved this chapter. I hope you make that seq. I think it would be interesting. Well, this was cute, especially when you described the yamis and hikaris.

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Tiamat: Great chappie!
Callista: Yeah!
Tiamat: Callista's my yami, she wasn't with me last time cuz she was wolfing down sugar....anyway, thanx for the note. Tea seems to just like Yami and Yugi as friends in the American version....course, I'm probably just missing something....
Callista: You're too innocent for a 19-year-old....here, want me to.....remedy that?
Tiamat: *blushes* I told you, I'm straight!
Callista: Are you? Or are you just saying that? Maybe you're not straight and you just don't know it yet...
Tiamat: Yuji, Yumi, PLEASE update soon! We not only enjoy your writing, but it keeps Callista from trying to have her way with me...Sugar does NOT work when she's horny...and she's horny most of the time...sugar only makes her hyper and keeps her from getting into trouble for the most part... She came to me a few weeks ago and my life hasn't been the same, considering I'm always trying to keep her out of trouble...
*KABOOM*
Callista: *calls from the kitchen* Tiamat? I was trying to make popcorn and the microwave exploded....
Tiamat: *groans* See what I mean? If you two have any suggestions on how to handle her, I'd gladly appeciate it...at this rate, I'm going to drop dead of exhaustion before you get the next chappie up, which would be a crying shame since you two are such great authors...keep up the great work you two!

Me: *smiles* u've updated!!!
Yami: *looks angry* damn, i can't destroy her?
Me: *laughs* how'd u know its a her?
Yami: *shrugs* just guessing
Me: *rolls eyes* yea right Yami. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Yami: yea, PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *walks away*
Me: *sighed* don't worry about her. PLEASE CONTINUE THAT'S ALL!!! *walks after Yami*