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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person KC
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its a good thing my Yami isn't here cause she'll beat the shit out of u!!! WHAT WAS THAT ABOUT?! MAKING SETO-KUN SAD?! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! AND MAKE SETO HAPPY AGAIN!!!
person Rose
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think is fic's very cute and very sad. I hope that Joey comes back. I just can't wait for an update.
person Yaky
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOOO! How could you do that they were going to get married and be HAPPY FOREVER that is just MEAN!!!!!!! ~Anyways~ I Still LIKE it: though I am a BIT MAD right now *but it's a great twist BABY* Stay out of this! Sorry that's just my boyfriend butting in like always ~like I said Anyways~ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

P.S
PROMISE YOU'LL E-mail me as SOON as YOU UPDATE I mean common even My Boyfriends reading it
SO YOU KNOW YOU'RE GOOD SO PLEASE Don't wait to long LUV U! ^_^
person Seth
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice... Really unexpected. I don't hate it at all... It's very intriguing and I cannot wait to find out what kind of plot twist you have decided to bestow upon us...
Later...
person Rurouni_agra
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You turned them back into puppies? AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Don't leave me hanging here. What in the nine hells did Mokuba do?
person leaf zelindor
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nooo!!!! @_# eeeeeeeeeeeeeee...he's a puppy again!!!!!! ~Leaf~
person KC
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blinks* did u just turn joey into a puppy again?!
Yami: calm down koi
Me: *pouts* but seto was going to marry joey!!!
Yami: *laughs* marrying a puppy dog now
Seto: *out of nowhere* hey, don't call my koi puppy except me!!!
Joey: *out of nowhere but hugs Seto* yea, only koi can call me that.
Yami: *gasped* the high preist!!! uh oh *leaves room quickly*
Seto: *smirk* she still remembers
Joey: PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
Me: HEY, THAT WAS MY LINE JOEY WHEELER!!!
Seto: yea puppy, don't steal a girl's line *kisses hi the the cheek*
Me: *sighed* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE THEN!!! *followz Yami*
Joey & Seto: WHEN IS THE WEDDING? WHERE'S THE LEMON ALSO? HOW R U GOING 2 CHANGE ME BACK?! CONTINUE SO WE CAN READ!!! *both leaves room*
person Yaky
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome I luv it please continue as soon as possible! And 'bout the wish I really don't know but I just luvd it if they got married and live happily ever after so please continue(yeah I'm kind of a softie) HURRY!!!!!!!

P.S
Please E-mail me when you update thanx LATER.... ^_____^
person DarkQueen
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY (so far) ~anywho~ you know what would be funny if Joey got pregnant? (just an idea nothing serious) Please continue as soon as possible HURRY THEY ARE JUST TOO CUTE I LUV ALL THIS COUPLES!!!!! ^__________^
person KC
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: Humph, a stupid cliff. Doesn't matter, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!