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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person Yaky
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOO how can you kill the both of them they were supposed to be happy forever *sobs* that is just so mean... Well I Hope they're at least together in heaven right?
person DarkQueen
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY that was mean but very interesting! But wait what 'bout the RIDDLE and how can you kill my FAV. couple well I hope your next chapter is that it was all a dream or that they're together in heaven. So PLZ cocntinue to update LATER...
person KC
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *shouts* NO!!! JOEY DIED?!
Yami: *hugs me* calm down aibou, u'll pay for this author *looks angrily at u*
Me: *smirk* KOI, CALM DOWN
Yami: *sighed* i'll be leaving *leaves room*
Me: *rolls eyes* anywayz, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE PLEASE!!! WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE!!! *follows Yami*
person ARAKI_KAE
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*POUT* I love this story. Continue soon, don't let either die. Death might be the begining, but, not now. Let them be together once more....
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great update keep up the great work
and thank you so much for your reviews more writing soon k?

ACIDFLOWER
person RetroMetro
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! How could you this was a realool ool fan fic then you had to make Kaiba forget!!! That sucks I'm sorry but it does WHY DID YOU DO THAT?!
person Yaky
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HELL NO I didn't expect that was just so mean man and what's with the riddle I guess I'll have to figure that out myself as well. I just can't believe the magician will do that Gosh I am just so MAD I think I better go *growls very loud* But hey don't get rongrong I know you'll fix it rigt? RIGHT?! WEll UPDATE SOON PLZ LATER!!!
person Seth
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"...Where'sy?"y?"
"Who's Joey?"

Ooh, nicely written out... Indeed a very unsuspecting plot twist. by the by, I think I know what that little riddle means...
Anyway, terrif' chapter, I impatiently await the next one to come.

Later...
person xenaienaixx
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HELL NO!!!!!>=[...WHAT DID YOU JUST DO!!!!!GRRRR!!!!...I CANT BELEIVE IT!!!
NOOO!!! DONT ERASE HIS MEMORIES!!!!T____T...i was like NUH UH!!!! YOU
DID NOT JUST DO THAT!!!!T____T....poor Jounouchi then,,well its nike ike he can
talkT_T....WAHHH!!!!!...I HATE YOU!!!!!!>=[....now Kaiba forgot about JouT_T...
well you better make it better in the next chapter!!!...damn that Seto better
remember JouT_T...hate you^^...hehehe..is very shocked here...i would have
never thought you to so thatT_T...well i HOPE that Seto will get his memories
back...or els'm c'm comin after you^_____^..hehehe...post up more^^
person Jadejj
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dame you sorry but I can't see Kaiba forgetting his lover...