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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sequel! you have no idea how much I enjoyed this fic, some parts even touched me. I can't wait for the sequel.
Btw thank you hon, if you could even a pwp of Yami/Bakura that been great ^__^ please keep up the writien.

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Acidflower

person DJ-Baby
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the late review!!!!!!!

Man, You know I love your fics. You made that last part really dark. Cool!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the sequle. I wish I could write like you but you know me.
Hehe...I'll talk to you later.
Good luck.

DJ Baby
person Riji
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
/shakes monitor like crazy/ NOOOOOO you can't do that to them. Haven't they been through enough. Whaaaaa. /Sniffs/ Can't they just have a nice little happy ending? Please Please pretty please. /sighs/ I guess I'm just a sucker for romantic happy endings, but however you decide to end this I're ire it'll be great whether it's happy or not I'll guess I'll just have to wait and see.
person Naye025
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved it! The ending is awesome...or was that the ending?? Hmmm...Anyways. I love the story! It's awesome! Please continue to write more! How can you just
not love Seto and Jou?

Ja!
person araki
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude what happened? Something tells me, Anzu's earlier rape has something to do with it...Update please
person KC
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn Yami is asleep cause she got drunk last nit*sni*snicker* well, continue or at least do a sequal!!! CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_0 what's going on hmmmmmm *puts hand on chin*
Ouch that hurt I was trying to think about this update, and thinking hurts. Update I like to see what you're going to do next very good plot ^__^
*hugs* until the next update and I really love your fics ^_^ more lemons *wink*

person KC
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: wait, how come i don't see the sequal anywhere???
Yami: koi, could you look at me for a minute please???
Me: *sighed* fine, what is it??? *looks at Yami*
Yami: *down at one knee holding a little box* will you marry me???
Me: *thinks for a moment* No...
Yami: WHAT??? YOU MUST BE JOKING!!!
Me: i'm not kidding koi, i'm still in high school and...
Yami: she's not telling you what grade she's in yet... but koi, i love you
Me: *sobs* i know koi, but i'm a little bit too young for that though
Yami: DAMN!!! *leaves room angrily*
Me: i should talk 2 her later though, don't worry, it will be fine. but i would never thought it would go this far though!!! Where's the sequal??? i thought i look but i can't find it unless i missed it though!!! Please put it up and tell me if i missed it!!! CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
person KC
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My Yami's asleep so be good first. WHAT?! SO, R U GOING 2 MAKE A SEQUAL AFTER THIS??? I MEAN, JOEY SAID 'NO' BUT WANTED TO WAIT UNTIL OLDER, RIGHT??? *jumps around* U BETTER MAKE A SEQUAL OR I'M GOING 2 BE FURIOUS AND GET MY YAMI COME AND GET U!!! PLEASE, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE THE NEXT STORY OR CHAPPIE!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG!!!
person Zerah
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
~Smiles happily, All Duel Monsters who were quite upset before are now all smiling and going about the activites they were doing before hand (Dark Magician and Blue Eyes are playing chess, Crimson Sentry and Lady Assalient of Flames are talking cheerfully about make-up, guys, and the latest in daggers and swords)~ We're all happy now :-) yay!