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for Wish Come True

by JesseVargas

person alostblackcat
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a nice fic, update soon please
person Seth
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As much as I would love to see them get to know one another... I'd rather have that lemon... Heh, I'm in such a --bad-- mood. Anyway, I like both choices, but I'm leaning more on having that lemon, please...

This was very interesting though, and I really am intrigued by this new angle... And I think I've heard this story before, I don't lnow maybe from my younger cousin... Anyway, Later...
person ArrowSphere
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind a lemon, but I think you should develop their relationship some more before they get "too" cozy with each other.
person pvt beavis666
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story. but have them get to know eachother.
person Kitt
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
C'mon, I've had enough of rushed lemons, let them talk some :D. Or rush lemon with angsty 'was that right...with a stranger?' after...or...XD