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for Mission: Can you win his heart

by ShadowSpecter17

person AngleWing
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You just don't stop making them better. Yaoi! Yaoi! Yaoi! []chant[] tee...he... Nice authers notes too...
person AngleWing
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u sure do make it intristing don't ya...he...he....*~'V[]demonted face[]
person AngleWing
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Doooooommmmm....Dooooooooommmm....I hate Anzu! Hate her!!! Hate her!!! Hate her!!! She must die!!!!!!!!! Oh, ya...^-^ and Marrik isn't the true ouner of the 'ROD' Tee...he... I love that word...well actualy anyways Seto is... I've seen the Japanise virsion... Oh well, oh and i just thoughout out your name... it is soooooo cute!^-*V 8======> What dose it look like to u?
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:hey Red here and nice ficcy now that this whole thing is starting to clear up some thanks for the clearing Shadow od Vad Varon sweety hehe IF U THINK ILL LET U HURT YUGI OR ARE SADLY MISTAKEN ILL HURT U SO BAD ILL MAKE DARTS LOOKS LIKE A FUCKING SAINT
WD:O.O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; goodness BRD really is starting to become a very bad influence for u red i mean your swearing and actually vicious

RD:WELL HOW WOULD U FEEL IF RYOU WERE IN YUGIS EXACT SAME SHOES HMMM
WD:^__^why i wuld tear the heart of an who who did hell id give them fifty times worse the treatement they give him

RD:uh huh thats what i thought HYPOCRITE grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr im very pissed of at varon oh and shadow dont take this personally but ive told ya before i really dont like anyone or anything hurting yugi so this is why im angry
BRD:same with me to ya know i hate any bastards who think they can get away with hurting yugi but they will all see right mistress
RD:why yes of course for by the name of the draconian millitary we will totally anihilate any who threaten or even think of threatening saf safety and well being of yugi moto this i promise well TTFN TA TA FOW NOW ^____~

WD,BRD:WILL U STOP SAYING THAT

RD:well now that u mention it NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*screams so loudly that she blows WD,BRD away* ok

WD,BRD:@__@o-k
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:grrrrrrrrr THAT GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING TWO FACE SON OF A BITCH and im not talking about you shaddow im talking about a certain millenium rod holder we all know and loath well id do right now anyways ILL RIP YOUR HEAD CLEAR OFF YOUR SHOULDERS MARIK THIS IS THE DAY U SO DIE *goes and grabs eighty DEs 200 different dds and dots(wich are direct dammage and damage over time spells) then goes chasing after the fleeing marik and fries and pounds him into the ground*there thats what u get for hurting yugi you bastard *cackles evilly that can be heard even outside the castle*
WD:-__-;;;;;;; its official shes lost it
BRD she she ever even have
*bolts of fire lightening strike both of them to a crisp
WD,BRD:O.O*bothe are sinders with bulging eyes*that-hurt well lovely fic as im sure red would say the same*suddenly the sky is warm and the sun is shinning*see well that all for now cy*clouds start for form*ah i I mean TTFN TA TA FOR NOW*the sky is clear again*meany*gets struck bye a flash of heart lightenigng
BRD:you really ought to know when to not say anythinll Tll TTFN TA TA FOR NOW shadow and good fic keep up the good work ^___~
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Varon IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MINE!!!!!!! MINE MINE MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think I made my point clear oh yes and Yami and Yugi to
Anyways great fic!!!

person DarkQueen
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Luv it thatwhatwhat I think although I'm a bit confuse do they all work for the same person who is trying to get to may Little YUGI??? (please kill Anzu that slut she's always w/My YAMI can't stand her KILL HER) ~anyways~ THANX FOR THE CANDY IF YOU INCLUDED ME!!! Well please update soon, LATER ^_^
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Varon!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT SEXY FOX

Varon: Oh my god Jenn calm down
AF: BABY COME TO ACID YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO!!
YAMI: *shakes head* Varon don't go to her she's evil.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this sounds like it's taking a dark twist me love those, but anyone could tell
Anyways happy you updated this was great. God I hate Anzu -_-
Anyways more soon
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:and your evil for even coming up with this strange story sheesh not that i dont like it but your story is jumping all over the place

White Dragon:yeah your telling me im mean one minute its like across between totally spies,james bond and mission impossible to the dooms organization saga in the later episodes of yugioh to the matrix i mean is it just me or is she very jumpy with her work

Black Red Dragon:oh she is jumpy alright either that or she has a very peculiar reason for doing this that we dont know yet hm

RD:well all i can say is that she is lucky im in a good mood due to one certain but major fact

WD,BRD:and whats that RD

RD:hehe I WENT TO MY HOMECOMING DANCE THE OTHER NIGHT IT WAS THE BEST ANYONE WHO WISHES TO KNOW PLEASE DONT HESITATE TO ASK BOUT IT IN EMAIL BUT IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FUN HEHE I DANCED LIKE A DEMON THE OTHER NIGHT well thats all for now

RD,WD,BRD:TTFN TA TA FOR NOW