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for Mission: Can you win his heart

by ShadowSpecter17

person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great but urgh rips out gair what's going to happen next update!
person DarkQueen
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, Awsome UPDATE!!!!!!!!
Awww, poor Yugi, those parents os his *sighs* Oh, well at least Yami is there, gods he's just so HOT!
Plz UPDATE SOON,can't wait to see what happens.
LATER...
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great update hon
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Story hon I am so glad that things are working out but poor Yugi that is so unfair to him EVIL PAERNTS I hope everything works out in the end hon OMG I LOVE THIS STORY ^__^ Keep ue exe excellent work I can't wait tnd ond out what happens next
Please update soon HON ^__-
person Yaky
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it was GOOD!!!!!! Amelda in love with Yami, interesting, but hey Varon so HOT!!!!!!!!!! Love to get a piece of that, though I do prefer Yami *drools* Yami mmmm.......~anywayz~ AWSOME job keep it up and update SOON, BYE ^_^.....
person DarkQueen
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm........Let's make it f GRE GREAT job as always, Keep it up! I'm glad they're going to spend the Holidays together, maybe a lemon from Kura&Ryou and Jou&Seto Mmmm....Jou&Seto!!!!!!!!! Well that's about it HOPE you Update SOON, LATER......
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SO cool I love all your fics and writing keep it up
ACIDFLOWER
person Yaky
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was GREAT!!! AWSOME job Guys Keep it up! Poor Marik but he deserved it for making Yugi forget 'bout Yami for a sec... Well Update SOON alright LATER...
person DarkQueen
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW Great Lemon You 2!!
It was 'bout you killed Marik(I mean don't get me wrong I LUV him and all but not in this Fic.) Oh, God Varon just gets Sexier by the minute now I love him more.Now that he killed Marik(Love you BABY) Anyways Update SOON PPL don't wait too Long.you see I involved my sis into the story so now you'll see another review(Just watch it she's kinds of a softie) well gotta go LATER...
person AngleWing
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow![]speechless[]That was writen beautiflly!!! He...He...But it was a little bit on the short side...and with that said I shall now cintinue on to the fallowing chapy...[]smile[]*_'