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for Mission: Can you win his heart

by ShadowSpecter17

person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its really cool wow Dartz is really evil i like it ^_^ (Yami is so hot especially as an agent) poor Yugi i hope Yami gets there to save him soon and he better watch his back too update soon you gotta you cant leave me hangin like tgoodgood job with this
person DarkQueen
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please make it better. And don't worry, you wonget get stabbed by me; that is unless you don't let Yami and Yugi be together!
It was one hell of a chapter, late but it was worth the wait. Poor Yugi ::sniff::
LATER...
person Mozartz_Ballad
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O Oh shit!!!!! Fuck!!!! OMG!!! YOU KILLED YUGI! YOU BASTARD!! *South Park quote*
Sorry just kidding. ^^; couldn't help myself.

Anyways, I really like this fic too. You left a nice cliff hanger. Now that Yugi's dead, now what? Poor Yami is going to be destroyed once he finds out that Yugi is already dead. .....or is Yugi really dead?
I look forward to the next chapter and your other fic your working on.
Please update soon.

Mozartz_Ballad
person ACIDBURN
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review ealier. didn't work. You made my Yami sniff with water eyes. Awww hugs Yami. I hate to see him hurt

yami: Jenn huh....what? have you seen the shit you'd been writing
AB: Sooo
UPDATE!
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On her knees
PLEASE UPDATE
SNIFF SNIFF SN
PL
PLEASE UPDATE YOU MUST HON PLEASE HUGS
YAMI SAVE YUGI PLEASE
CREIES KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWW
poor Yugi awwwww sniff sniff sniff
please keep up the great work hon
Update when ever you can
YOU ROCK HON
person paulina
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a great fic continue.
person Rragoragon of Egypt
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD:*puffs of smoke starts billowing out of her nostrils from her anger and rage*why that dirty self-servering son of a bitch when i get my hands on darts he is SOO MINE hey BRD WD care to join me sisters

BRD&WD:sure wed me happy to* bother grab a Dark Ember some EQ spells and start attacking Darts and start cng hng him laughing the whole time like maniacs*

RD:HEY wait for me*goes with them and they all start viciously attacking darts*thats what u get u monster for hurting and threatening yugi u bastard oh and shadow dear lovely fic but pls if u will DESTROY THIS BASTARD AND BRING YUGI BACK SAFELY TO YAMI"S ARMS GOT THAT DARTS DOSNT WIN COPICE grr well thats all for now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW *continues hurting darts*die SOB DIE DIE DIE MWAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHA eeheh grgrm um BYE ^_____~
person DarkQueen
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, I need more, lots more!
That was so awesome. I'm really enjoying this story, it's so good!
LATER...
person Ryuki
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this story! Will you please write the next chapter quickly???? PLEASE?! Or I'll kill!!!!!!!!!!!