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for Mission: Can you win his heart

by ShadowSpecter17

person RandomPerson
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, although everyone seemed to kind of brush it off when Anzu died at the end. It's probably too late to vote now, but I liked the sound of idea number two out of your next fics - then again, I like any YGO fanfic with Ancient Egypt in it. Just be sure to give it plenty of lemony goodness if you're going to do it!
person smalvina
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was nice
person silver_yoko2000
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it. i wish i could write like you do and i think i'm older that you!!!!!!! i like the idea for fruit of temptation alot. think you should write that one ^^
person DarkQueen
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. Actually, I had expected Yugi to stay dead, but it was a great ending! You did an awesome job!
My vote is #2. I just can't hurt my Puppy, and #2 sounds pretty good; Anzu bashing and shit...Oh Yeah, real good!
LATER...
person XxNeko_YoukaixX
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww this fic was really good i like it a lot & about the votes i pick #2 The Fruit of Temptation mainly 'cause i don't like anzu/tea & i like to see her suffer while Yami & Yugi have the time of their lives *snicker*
person Youko Jaganshi
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"2.) The Fruit of Tempta: Ya: Yami, prince of Egypt is being forced to marry Anzu, princess of Rome. When he travels to Rome to officially meet her, he also meets her younger brother, Yugi, and falls for him instead! And, with a traitor lurking amongst them, will their love be able to survive?"

this one looetteetter well maybe cuz i have this thing for rome and egypt

oh and the story was soo cool i liked it i kinda cried at the end it was so sad....
person YamiNShadowsGirl
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww sniff it can't be over well good job i love a happy ending dont you im glad Yugi was saved and that both Yami and Yugi can be happy oh and both fics look interesting but i think that no 1 looks good after all i dont think i have ever seen a fic where Yami gets bullied its usualy Yugi that gets it but dont make Yami completely weak i look forward to whichever one you decide on though
person Baibadoll
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Fruit of Temptation, The Fruit of Temptation, I vote for The Fruit of Temptation. (by the way I loved this story and just about every other story you write, I'd have to say you're my favorite writer)
person person
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this is a really cool story! I vote on number 1, for your next story. It sounds cool how Yami is the one being picked osteastead of Yugi. Can't wait till your next story is out! ^^
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww that chapter was sad and sweet
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ^_^
oh and I vote for number 2 it sounds intersting
PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK HON
awww THAT STORY ROCKED ^__^